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Topic 3: Educational background and personal
Education is the fastest way to help people improve knowledge and stall. After graduating from high school, I entered college.
Last year, I was freshmen of HCM city university of transport. Thus, O was quite busy with many tasks such as enrollment, paying tuition, joining citizen education and so on. I learned a difficult subject. But fortunately, I passed the course. Now I am a sophomore. I have to face with the other difficult subjects and there even more friends and I don’t miss home anymore. I focus on studying and try my best to graduate from university. After that, I will look for a good job.

Answer 1

Education is one of the fastest ways to improve knowledge. After graduating from high school, I entered a college. 
Last year, I was a freshman of HCM city University of Transport. Thus, I was quite busy with many tasks such as enrollment, tuition payment, citizen education application and so on. I learned a subject which seemed difficult to me but fortunately I pass the final test of it. Now I am a sophomore. I have to face with many other tougher subjects and I don’t miss home anymore since I have made numerour nice friends. I focus on studying and try my best to graduate from my  university. After that, I will look for a good job.

Answer 2

Education is one of the fastest ways to improve knowledge. After graduating from high school, I entered a college.  
Last year, I was a freshman of HCM city University of Transport. Thus, I was quite busy with many tasks such as enrollment, tuition payment, citizen education application and so on. I learned a subject which seemed difficult to me but fortunately I pass the final test of it. Now I am a sophomore. I have to face with many other tougher subjects and I don’t miss home anymore since I have made numerour nice friends. I focus on studying and try my best to graduate from my  university. After that, I will look for a good job.