Bài IELTS Task 2 sáng 19/7 - IDP Hà Nội - entertaining and educational @@@@@@

Question

The acceleration of technological developments has been making the world a great and convenient place to live in the great world . Because of today's technology has provided various leisure options, visualization of learning content and entertainment contributes to giving people more opportunities to communicate and work together. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also has ADVANTAGES and DISADVANTAGE .  Nowaday, the proportion of people using smartphone have been increasing significantly .it bring both benefits and negatives to users. I will dicuss it in detail below:

First of all, smartphones are one of the most significant inventions for our in life. Because smartphones can help people keep in touch with families, friends, colleagues anytime and anywhere. Secondly, it also has considered one of the modern educational methods by using them everyone can access dictionary just by tapping the word if you don't know the meaning of the word . thirdly  Mobile phones technology made and still makes the world a small village. With one of them in your pocket, as long as it is on, you can connect with friends, family or even make new friends around the globe. Thanks to calling ability, texting, video calls, chats, and the event full social media, you will remain connected as long as you wish.
One the other hand , it is true that smartphones can help students in studies but only if they use them wisely. Most of the other students are busy to keep their eyes on their smartphones at all times then they won't get time for studying which would lead poor grades.In conclusion, smartphones are necessary for our modern lives today. However, it is helpful or not, which depends on our ways of using it. It will be better if we use its true purpose and at an appropriate time .

Answer 1

I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also has ADVANTAGES and DISADVANTAGEs

 Secondly, it also has been considered one of the modern educational methods, by using them everyone can access dictionary just by tapping the word if you don't know the meaning of the word --> everyone can know the meaning of the word just by tapping it on a dictionary application.

which would lead to poor grades