Describe my best friend

Question

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My best friend is Dat. The first reason I consider him as my best friend is that he has a very warm personality.
He is so friendly when he meets me everywhere. For example, he always smiles politely on me that makes me absolutely delighted when I meet him. The second reason is that Dat is a funny person. He always tells me some funny stories in order to reduce stress from studying. In addition, He is mighty smart. According to my observation, he easily understands the lessons when he reads or studies. He is my good example forever. To summarize, Dat is one of my best friends who has a good personality that make me more happy and interested in him. I really like him.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

 

My best friend => soulmate=buddy is Dat.

The first reason I consider him as my best friend is that he has a very warm personality. => câu này từ consider có vẻ không hay lắm vì nó mang nghĩa tui suy nghĩ rồi mới coi bạn đó là bạn thân tui vì tính thằng đó ấm áp, làm mình cảm giác nó không giống bạn thân lắm. Mình nghĩ nên thử chuyển cách nói xem sao: We do care for each other and my buddy is extremely a gentle, sensitive man. 

He is so friendly when he meets me everywhere. For example, he always smiles politely on me that makes me absolutely delighted when I meet him.=> từ politely làm mình thấy hai bạn là bạn xã giao hơn bạn thân, mình thử viết thể này nha: I feel contented to  (cảm thấy hạnh phúc) see his charming smile each every time we meet each other.

The second reason is that Dat is a funny person. He always tells me some funny stories in order to reduce stress from studying. In addition, He is mighty smart. According to my observation, he easily understands the lessons when he reads or studies. => Moreover, he has a great sense of humor. He always tells me some funny stories  to help me have chilling time and reduce stress  from studying hard day and night. .... He help me understand the lesson easier.

To summarize, Dat is one of my best friends => buddies who has a good personality that make me more happy => happier and interested in him. I really like  him

Thêm nữa mình thử phát triển ý tiếp thử nha: We still are friend with shared interests. Although we are student with tight schedule, we are still spend time dining out/ playing football/ playing chess together.