Dream of the UK, dream of flying away

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The United Kingdom – which is associated with an ancient castles, traditions and cultures, have been formed for thousands of years and especially England. England is home to the dreams of thousands of young people and me. My dream is to study in England, to be exposed to the world’s leading education. I want to see the castles, want to see the purple color of the wisteria crowns covering all the streets of London on the summer, want to ride the bike around Cambridge, Oxford, or hear the sound of the clock Big Ben every fifteen minutes.

England has occupied a certain position in my heart and will never have anything to replace. So I choose University of Exeter as the place to put my dream into reality. University of Exeter is located in Exeter, is a good university, facilities and quality teaching, is a university always ranked in top 20 in the ranking of universities in England and I feel this university really suits me and is appropriate for the subject I want to study. Currently I am studying Accounting but when I study in England I want to study Business Administration to be able to achieve my goals faster. Listen to everything I desire to look a bit distant, a bit mythical but if you do not dream, not oriented for your future then it is a mistake, you are the loser of your own future, only you need to dream things real and try your best then your dream will come true.

In the future, I would like to be a Strategic Consultant, living in London and working in Deloitte – one of the four largest corporations in the world specializing in Accounting, Auditing and Finance. I know a saying :“ Dream don’t work unless you work” so I am trying my best to win the most valuable scholarship and ielts 8.0 so that I can touch my dream in near future.

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The United Kingdom – which is associated with an ancient castles, traditions and cultures, have been formed for thousands of years and especially England. England is home to the dreams of thousands of young people and me. My dream is to study in England, to be exposed to the world’s leading education. I want to see the castles, want to see the purple color of the wisteria crowns covering all the streets of London on the summer, want to ride the bike around Cambridge, Oxford, or hear the sound of the clock Big Ben every fifteen minutes.

England has occupied a certain position in my heart and will never have anything to replace. So I choose University of Exeter as the place to put my dream into reality. University of Exeter is located in Exeter, is a good university, facilities and quality teaching, is a university always ranked in top 20 in the ranking of universities in England and I feel this university really suits me and is appropriate for the subject I want to study. Currently I am studying Accounting but when I study in England I want to study Business Administration to be able to achieve my goals faster. Listen to everything I desire to look a bit distant, a bit mythical but if you do not dream, not oriented for your future then it is a mistake, you are the loser of your own future, only you need to dream things real and try your best then your dream will come true.

In the future, I would like to be a Strategic Consultant, living in London and working in Deloitte – one of the four largest corporations in the world specializing in Accounting, Auditing and Finance. I know a saying :“ Dream don’t work unless you work” so I am trying my best to win the most valuable scholarship and ielts 8.0 so that I can touch my dream in near future.