topic City Life

Question

City life

I don’t life City life. Although, Life in the city is full activity and it’s developing quickly. This gives a more and more good life for people. But, it also makes to appear many big problems for society. First, it’s a problem about society such as drug addiction, prostitution, robberies, and so on. Second, a big problem is pollution. Air is full of smoke from industrial zones, vehicles…every day. Nowadays, more and more people get respiratory diseases. Finally, traffic problems haven’t solved. The roads are often traffic jam. There are many accidents every day because the roads are narrow and in bad conditions… In summary, more and more matters exist in the city.

Answer 1

don't = do not: Writing không được viết tắt đâu

don't life = do not live: ở đây phải dùng động từ chứ không phải danh từ nhé

City life nên được dùng bằng những từ đông nghĩa khác

is full of + N

more & more chứ k có a more and more nha

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Answer 2

I don’t life City life ( I do not live in city). Although, Life in the city is full ( full of activities)  activity and it’s developing quickly. This gives a more and more good life for people ( living in city is good place for many people  to live . But, it also makes to appear many big problems for society ( there are many issues in city. First, it’s a problem about society such as drug addiction, prostitution, robberies, and so on. Second, a big problem is pollution. Air is full of smoke from industrial zones, vehicles…every day. Nowadays, more and more people get respiratory diseases. Finally, traffic problems haven’t solved. The roads are often traffic jam. There are many accidents every day because the roads are narrow and in bad conditions… In summary, more and more matters exist in the city.

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