Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Question

Whether dangerous sports should be prohibited or people are free to do any sports or activity they like has become a cotroversial issue in both daily conversations and political discussions.There are good reasons that can be considered for both views.

Obviously ,it is undeniable that people have to face a number of problems when taking risk at adventrous activities.First of all,injuries are inevitable if players are poorly trained or ignorant of  safety regulations.Take motor racers or horse-drivers as common examples.Every day,there are dozens of accidents broadcast on sports channels in which athletes have their arms or legs broken,and even die if serious.The long-term effects can be that the public begin showing their concern when taking part in such dangerous outdoors sports and that the health-care system becomes over-burdened while more money and facilities should be spent on finding cures for cancers or AIDS.

 However,from my point of view,I would say that the rights to do sports should be up to one’s own choice.Because of the fact that each person has a particular interest in some type of sport or activity,especially physically demanding ones favored by the youth,it is unrealistic to list them as forbidden.For examle, some people were born into families that are full of achievements of adventurous members such as championships in skiing,wind-surfing or boxing contests,resulting in their pursuits of the same careers.In addition,putting oneself in danger can help improve personal qualities and broaden his mind.When a team get lost during a mountain-climbing,each member has to use all his knowledge as well as skills gained before to both survive and strengthen the whole group.

 

 

In summary,I personally think that each sport or activity created has it own values, so there should not be any ban on it.Once people have experienced breathtaking moments in their lives,they will grow calmer and more mature.

p/s: lần sau đừng bôi đen bài và đặt tít dài như này nữa nha bạn . Jack

Answer 1

Mình thích idea của bạn, mình góp ý một ít về ngữ pháp thôi.

 

First of all,injuries are inevitable if players are poorly trained or ignorant of  safety regulations

 

ignorant là tính từ, mình nghĩ ở đây nên thay bằng 1 động từ -> ignored its safety regulation.

 

Because of the fact that each person has a particular interest in some types of sport or activity

 

each member has to use all his knowledge as well as skills gained before (accumulated skills) to both survive and strengthen the whole group.

Comments

thanks bạn nha.mình muốn giải thích:
ignorant of :không biết,phớt lờ
some type:loại hình nào đó,k phải số nhiều
còn accumulated skills thì mình agree với bạn

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uhm, cảm ơn bạn, góp ý cùng tiến bộ thôi :)

Answer 2

Em chỉ tập viết mấy tháng nay nên mong anh chị có nhiều kinh nghiệp sửa giúp em, em xin cảm ơn rất nhiều ạ. 

The methodology of playing sports and activities has constantly evolved as a major concern of topic in recent years. There are a number of citizens who subscribe to the viewpoint that governments should prohibit harmful sports while others disagree with this perspective and demonstrate that everyone has the right of freedom to do any sports. Personally, I strongly contend that instead of banning dangerous sports, authorities and specialists should smoothly cooperate to tackle this problem.

There is no disputing the fact that participating in destructive activities would apparently jeopardize for not only contestants but also audiences. Supposing that competitors entered high-risk sports in relation with dangerous facilities such as long swords, guns, etc, they would simply generate unpredictable damages for innocent civilians. Another noteworthy explanation supporting this opinion is that those abovementioned performances will significantly encourage adolescent people who are easily affected by violent behaviors into those sports.

On the other hand, I am extremely persuaded that in addition to some drawbacks mentioned above, those athletics could bring about outstanding benefits for communities. Firstly, the perilous exercises which initially require restricted conditions regarding to players’ expertise, will become attractive targets of most young people, especially those would like to experience adventurous emotion. Thereby, such sports will activate more and more teenagers engaging those games. Additionally, the physical exercises help transferring intensive motivation for every citizen to activate them doing routine work-out to keep fit. In order to assure security rules for contestants, I recommend that relevant agencies should tightly collaborate to research and develop auspicious equipments which can protect participants from harmful resources.

In conclusion, although dangerous sports contain several disadvantages, I am of opinion that entering those activities would create multiple profitable factors as long as organizers guarantee safe requirements.

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