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The person that I trust the most is my best friend, Nha. She is 18 years old. She is also my English private tutor who has been teaching me for 3 years.

She is very pretty with a lovely round face and beautiful dark brown eyes. Although she is not so tall, her black hair us very long and silky. Her favorites clothes are jeans, T-shirts and sneakers for their comfort. At first, she appeared serious but  later she showed her humorous side. She always makes me laugh all the times when we see each other. She is not only good at English but she also plays piano exceptionally well. She can even compose songs. Furthermore, conscientiousness is the most beautiful personality of her. She makes people feel pleasant in her caring and understanding quality.

She is both well-qualified teaches and precious friend to me. I hope our relationship can last long and remain stable.
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The person that I trust the most is my best friend, Nha. She is 18 years old. She is also my English private tutor who has been teaching me for 3 years.

She is very pretty with a lovely round face and beautiful dark brown eyes. Although she is not so tall, her black hair us is very long and silky. Her favorites favorite clothes are jeans, T-shirts and sneakers for their comfort. At first, she appeared serious but  later she showed her humorous side. She always makes me laugh all the times when we see each other. She is not only good at English but she also plays the piano exceptionally well. She can even compose songs. Furthermore, conscientiousness is the most beautiful personality of her. She makes people feel pleasant in her caring and understanding quality.

She is both a well-qualified teaches teacher and a precious friend to me. I hope our relationship can last long and remain stable.

Mình có vài góp ý nhỏ về một số điểm trong bài bạn như trên thôi. Mình thấy bạn viết khá tốt và lưu loát rồi đấy, tiếp tục cố lên nhé :)

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