what do you often do in your free time?

Question

As a teacher and a mother with two sons i don't have a lot of free time during a week. But I do manage my free time most days.

I love reading book so after helping my children with homework i often spend time on reading short stories for my kids. They get interested in the stories i tell them every evening. I think it's also a good way to teach them some lessons about sourrounding life.

As a wife I often tidy the room and clean the floor or toilet whenever I am. I feel very happy to make everything in my house  look shining

I am currently an English teacher at College of Fine Arts. I often use internet to find information or search documents to build my lesson plan. Internet hels me much to provide my students with informative and useful lecture. I also use internet to keep in touch with my friends and my family. I have a group of friends and we are now so busy with our own family. Therefore we often share and exchange information about our life with each other viva facebook. It makes us get closer though we don't have time to get together as often as we did

In my opinion, free time activities are important to peple beause it not only contribute to reduce tension but it is a good way to tighten relationships between family members and among friends.

Answer 1

1. Nếu bài viết này theo dạng Academic, bạn cần sửa những chỗ viết tắt như don't -> do not, it's -> it is nhé!

2. As a wife I often tidy the room and clean the floor or toilet whenever I am  ?? Chỗ này I am có nghĩa là sao bạn nhỉ? Mình nghĩ ý của bạn là whenever I can chăng?

3. The Internet

4. it not only contribute quên chia động từ nè!!!

5. tighten relationships between (among) family members and among friends.

 

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