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Children should always follow their parents’s advice. Do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes argued that offspring ought to obey their parents’s advice at all time. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea.

On the one hand, taking parents’s advice bring a wide range of advantages. firstly, parents give their children advice in order to make them avoid much problems and dangers because they are too young to solve that.as an example, in VIETNAM, parents always advise their baby not to allow strangers to go into home when stay at there alone. Furthermore, children could broden their knowledge  about many things in life via parents’s advices which they gain due to experience. Also, the amount of information provided by parents’s advices is trustworthy. It is easy for children are deceieved by data from unreliable people especially on internet.   

On the other hand,sometimes it could be beneficial in some ways without following parents’s advices. One of these is to gain valuable insight through what children experience by themselves. children can learn the right just when they do the wrong so parents should let their offspring to behave and make discussion without advices.Another reason is that disobeying parents’s advice to creat an undependent life for children. They might not dependent on their parents if parents do not give them advice regularly.therefore, in the future, they will become more mature when live far home.

In conclusion, I believe that children can  follow their parents’s advice in order to find a way to deal with problem, but they can learn more things through experiencing by themselves 

Answer 1

Children should always follow their parents’s advice. Do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes argued that offspring ought to obey their parents’s advice at all time. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea.

On the one hand, taking parents’s advice bring a wide range of advantages. firstly, parents give their children advice in order to make them avoid much (many) problems and dangers because they are too young to solve that.as an example, in VIETNAM, parents always advise their baby (babies) not to allow strangers to go into home when stay at there alone. Furthermore, children could broden (get) their knowledge, they gain from what they suffered about many things in life via parents’s advices which they gain due to experience. Also, the amount of information provided by (from) parents’s advices is trustworthy. It is easy for children are (to be) deceieved by data from unreliable people especially on internet.  
On other hand,sometimes it could be beneficial in some ways without following parents’s advices. One of these is to gain valuable insight through what children experience by themselves. children can learn the right just when they do the wrong so parents should let their offspring to behave and make discussion (do what they think right) without any following parent's advices.Another reason is that disobeying parents’s advice to would creat an undependent (independent) life for children. They might not dependent on their parents if parents do not give them advice regularly.therefore, in the future, they will become more mature when live far from home.

In conclusion, I believe that children can  follow their parents’s advice in order to find a best way to deal with problem, but they can learn more things through experiencing by themselves

(I hope it will be helpful to u, best regard!)

Comments

thanks a lot but i think that ''broden their knowledge'' is better than ''get their knowledge'' :))

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but what does "broden their knowledge" mean? I searched in every dict I knew but couldnt find it

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oh. i'm absolutely sorry. broaden their knowledge. :))))