Should teachers have to wear uniforms ?

Question

Nowadays,most of students have to wear uniforms to school.Similarly,I think teachers should have to wear uniforms to school because of many benefits. To begin with,uniforms make teachers look earnest and beauiful.In a school,if each teacher wears their own costume with their own styles,colors,it will look like a public place,not a school.Secondly,when teachers wear uniforms,they won't have to worrry about dressing no more.Every teachers,especially female teachers,often wasting a great deal of time and money on choosing dresses and paying for them.Thus,if every teachers wear uniforms,they will save time and money for other work.Moreover,wearing uniforms shows them to society that they are teachers.This is a noble profession in society.Besides,teachers wearing uniforms proud of their job and their school than those who don't.And,when the students see their teachers wearing uniforms,they will not feel uncomfortable no more when being required to wear uniforms. Therefore,wearing uniforms is necessary to teachers.

Answer 1

ưu điểm của bạn là viết những câu đơn giản và trình bày quan điểm khá rõ ràng, tuy nhiên minh co vai gop y nho voi ban: 

1. Bố cục bào viết của bạn còn chưa được rõ ràng và thoát ý, còn cảm thấy chưa logic. Văn phong còn Việt Nam hóa nhiều

2. Ngữ pháp:

- every teacher thì ko có s ở teacher nha.

- Viết câu chưa hoàn thiện chủ vị, cụ thể ."Every teachers,especially female teachers,often wasting a great deal of time and money on choosing dresses and paying for them"

- Bạn nên sử dụng nhiều từ nối hơn để bài viết logic và trơn tru về diễn đạt hơn

3. Mình có sửa lại một số chỗ ở dưới, bạn có thể tham khảo. Bài viết này cũng khá đơn giản và chưa có nh từ ngữ học thuật nên bạn có thể bổ sung thêm sau để hoàn thiện hơn nhé/

Recently, most of students have to wear uniforms to school. In my view point, wearing uniforms bring many benefits to our teachers as follow. . To begin with, uniforms make teachers look formal and beautiful. It is irrefutable that each teacher wears their own styles, educational environment will look like a public place. This is direct influence on student’s results as well as implementing school’s regulations. For example, being required students’ uniforms will enforce more easily and more large scale. Secondly, when teachers wear uniforms, they won't have to worrry about dressing no more. Every teacher, especially female teachers, often wastes a great deal of time and money on choosing dresses. Thus, if every teacher wears uniforms, they will save time and money for other work. Moreover, wearing uniforms can help managers and parents easier to monitor and control our teachers’ behavior during working time. . Besides, a good teacher also feel more proud of their  position in our society when wearing their uniforms..In brief, it is necessary to approve rule of teachers’ uniform to make educational environment better and more professional .

 

Comments

a good teacher also feel : feels

a good teacher also feel more proud of their  position in our society when wearing their uniforms: bạn dùng a good teacher thì tại sao bạn lại để their......... mình nghĩ bạn nên bỏ a và thêm s ở chữ teacher thì câu của bạn sẽ k sai

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Ok, cảm ơn bạn nhé

Answer 2

Đừng dùng nowadays, thay vào đó dùng in today's society....Vi minh da doc trong quyen sach day viet cho thi ielts thi cấm dùng nowadays.

Every teachers,especially female teachers,often wasting a great deal of time and money on choosing dresses and paying for them....

teachers wearing uniforms proud of their job and their school than those who don't ..........

the students: minh nghi ko co the

Answer 3

Nowadays,(In today society) most of students have to wear uniforms to school.Similarly,I think teachers should have to(bo di 'have to' de tranh lap tu nhe ban) wear uniforms to school because of many benefits (dung 'reasons' se hay hon). To begin with,uniforms make teachers look earnest and beautiful.In a school,if each teacher wears their own costume with their own styles,colors,it will look like a public place,not a school.Secondly,when teachers wear uniforms,they won't (will no more) - khong dung phu dinh voi 'no more, no longer' nhe ban have to worrry about dressing no more.Every teachers(teacher),especially female teachers,often wasting (wastes) a great deal of time and money on choosing dresses and paying for them.Thus,if every teachers wear(s) uniforms,they will save time and money for other work.Moreover,wearing uniforms shows them to society that they are teachers.This is a noble profession in society.Besides,teachers wearing uniforms are proud of their job and their school than those who don't.And,when the students see their teachers wearing uniforms,they will not (will no longer/more) feel uncomfortable no more when being required to wear uniforms. Therefore,wearing uniforms is necessary (nen dung 'essential') to (for) teachers