a happy event [closed]

Question

The happiest time of my life was three years ago when i was accepted into PY U. I had just finished my exams and i was sleeping in my room. I really thought i had not passed. At that time, i wrote exams, i wasn’t feeling well. I had caught a cold. I was quite depressed and decided to forget it. Then my father came in with the report. I told my father i didn’t want to look at the . So he opened it up himself. He told me i had passed and had been accepted, but i didn’t believe him. He pretended to hide his joy while i pretended to hide my tears. The next day i phoned all my friends. I felt happy because i had tried very hard. I also knew my mother would be proud of me. Because before she died she has recommended me to be a teacher. Perhaps that was greatest feeling for me. I will never forget it.

Answer 1

The happiest time of my life was three years ago when i was accepted into PY U. I had just finished my exams and i was sleeping in my room. I really thought i had not passed. At that time, i wrote exams( I took the exams, mình nghĩ sẽ tốt hơn), i wasn’t (không được viết tắt trong bài viết) feeling well. I had caught a cold. I was quite depressed and decided to forget it. Then my father came in with the report. I told my father i didn’t want to look at the ???? . So he opened it up himself. He told me i had passed and had been accepted, but i didn’t believe him. He pretended to hide his joy while i pretended(mình nghĩ không nên lặp lại động từ  , nên thay bằng tried) to hide my tears. The next day i phoned all my friends. I felt happy because i had tried very hard. I also knew my mother would be proud of me. Because before she died she has recommended me to be a teacher. Perhaps that was greatest feeling for me. I will never forget it.

 

Comments

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