being single mom

Question

The more society becomes the more the rules are broken down.Indeed, we are studying the ways to live together with these ike an obvious fact. Being a single mom is not a very serious matter nowadays. In my opinion, there are some advantages when a woman decided to become a single mom.

  First, the association between mom and her child is always attached so closely. You will be only person who solves your child's problem directly, and educated them as well. Therefore, you can believe that your child's good characteristics are belong to you. The second, you will know the way to spend your money more suitable. An obvious advantage that give for a single mom is the self-control quality in finance. With the numer of money that you get everymonth, you can spend them for necessary things without husband's intrvenes.The final, you have your own space besides your child. After hard working, you can spend time for your child, take him or her for a walk, read picture books for him, and do everthing that you want.

  I do not suppor this idea, but i still believe that being a single mom is always has its own advantages.

Answer 1

bạn ơi mình nghĩ là The more society becomes thì phải là the more + adj the society become vd: The more divided a society becomes.

You will be "only" person thì là "the only" nữa   educated them as well ~~> educate (lưu ý thì)

your child's good characteristics are belong to you mình nghĩ nên là depend on thì hợp lí hơn tại vì belong to khẳng định sự sở hữu quá

you will know (the way ~~> how) to spend your money more suitable ~~> suitably

An obvious advantage that give for a single mom ~~> An obvious advantage of being a single mom 

với câu dưới spend money on ^^

you have your own space besides your child ~ tức là có kgian riêng ngoài việc chăm sóc con?

 being a single mom is always has its own advantages ~~> bỏ is nhé :p

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