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Question

The bar chart depicts how many percentages of contribution to UK economy by agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial from 1990 to 2000

As is illustrated by the bar chart, there was an upward trend in the contribution of business and financial while agriculture and manufacture saw a significant decrease during 100 years period

The bar chart showed that in the twentieth century, the contribution of agriculture and business and financial are opposites. In 1990, the greatest proportion was agriculture which accounted for 50% while only 5% in the contribution of business and financial which was the lowest figure. By contrast, until 2000 agriculture obtained roughly 2% which decreased dramatically to 25 times. Meanwhile there was an increase more than 7 times in the contribution of business and financial which reached a peak at 35%

It is clear that from 1900 to 2000, manufacturing saw a drop continuously. In 1900 manufacturing made up 45% until 1975 this point kept this trend with 32% before falling to 15% in 2000.

Answer 1

Có một số chỗ theo mình bạn cần sửa 

are opposites

the greatest proportion was agriculture => chủ ngữ là proportion mà vị ngữ là agriculture 

Answer 2

bạn cần thêm dấu câu

 In 1900, manufacturing made up 45% until 1975. this point kept this trend with 32% before falling to 15% in 2000.