Never before has an international sports event become so popular as it is does now. Sports event plays an essential role for many countries, so the governments catch opportunities to host this international competition. Although hosting an international sports event is thought to be capable of beneficial for the country, some people indicated that it is negative. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
It is apparent that holding any international events gives us plenty of benefits. First and foremost, celebrating such events helps advertise the image of cultures and people in these countries. For instance, SEA-GAME 31 hosted in Vietnam broadens promoted beautiful landscapes and delicious cuisines such as Bunbo in Hue, Pho in Hanoi, etc. This leads to boost the economy in places, helps many residents can trade better. Secondly, lots of people have a chance to meet their favorite idols and exchange them together, which brings good opportunities for both sides in terms of foreign affair. Last but not least, national athletes learn and cultivate international ones. For example, Quang Hai and Cong Phuong, who are professional players in Vietnam, stand the chance of improving their skills better when playing with Son Heung Min, Ronaldo, and Messi.
However, the international sports event has some potential demerits for countries. First, holding huge events consumes costs a lot, which affects badly on developing countries such as those in Southeast Asia. In addition to this, some sports events are not typical and suitable for people in countries. They may trigger some bad problems such as sky-high prices, traffic jams, pollution. Especially, they cause numerous costly numerous constructions, which were may be abandoned after then. Last and foremost, participating in international games is not suitable for the current situation, when the COVID-19 pandemic has occurring is causing lots of disasters in the world. Athletes can be infected and these lead to unintended consequences.
In conclusion, there are plenty of benefits and disbenefits of this trend. If events are wanted to take place, governments in countries should consider their situation and economic conditions. Only by doing so, the living standard will be improved and citizens will be happier.
Some of my comments:
- You have implemented some relatively clear and reasonable ideas.
- However, you are still making some mistakes in grammar and using words.
- You should learn more collocations to include in your essay, this can help you improve your band score as well as express your opinion more clearly.
- You can try using conjunctions to make more compound sentences.
- You should avoide using absolute expressions because you can not be sure that what you are presenting is completely true in every case. Instead, use "may" which is much safer.
Overall, you have done well, hope my comments can help you!