Nowadays, more and more individuals are capable of SHOOTING films (and some major films studios were made films in the past.)-> mình không hiểu đoạn này lắm. Personally, I think this is a POSITIVE trend.
There are a lot of benefits FOR people TO shoot films. Firstly, IT HELPS opening the door for everyone (to develop their opportunities)-> BỎ to increase their natural talents FOR films. The development of smartphone and the Internet has allowed individuals to produce their films with LOW PRICE (FILMS), this can help people to improve and follow their hobby. Secondly, this trend CREATES a lot of job opportunities. For example, now many individuals PRODUCE films after (their)-> BỎ UPDATING their own films through social networking SITES like YouTube – one of THE MOST famous video sharing website. This can help them earn money BASED on the view of this video, they can earn a lot of money if their VIDEOS HAVE high viewing figure. Thirdly, VARIOUS PEOPLE PRODUCING FILMS can create a large number of films and provide viewers with more CHOICES to watch.
Beside benefits, people WHO are able to produce films HAVE ( PEOPLE SỐ NHIỀU) SOME (A LITTLE CHO DANH TỪ KHÔNG ĐẾM ĐƯỢC) DRAWBACKS (NEGATIVE TÍNH TỪ). Firstly, these films can negatively affect (for)-> BỎ young viewers. Films that are produced by individuals and UPDATED on the Internet are EASILY ( STRICTLY THÌ NGƯỢC VỚI CÂU SAU) censored compared with the films made by big companies. As a result, many films having violent and sexual contents will be produced which can affect (for)->BỎ children. There are more and more cases which children follow actions in VIDEOS or films on the Internet and as A result, A LARGE NUMBER OF (SOME) children hurt THEMSELVES, especially die. Secondly, (the)-> BỎ ( films are made by individuals who DO NOT (VĂN PHONG TRANG TRỌNG KHÔNG VIẾT TẮT) graduate or learn formally (study)-> BỎ about producing film, as a result, many films having low-qualiFY, and can UNsure about FILM content (films)-> BỎ. ) THỰC SỰ THÌ MÌNH THẤY PHẦN NÀY KHÔNG ĐƯỢC THUYẾT PHỤC LẮM.
In conclusion, produced films by individuals or major studio films (also have a lot of benefits and the development both of methods produced films are going to improve quality films and provide for viewers the films with high quality and good content.)-> THAT PEOPLE CAN PRODUCE FILMS IS A positive DEVELOPMENT. THE PROGRESS OF WAYS TO PRODUCE FILMS IS GOING TO IMPROVE QUALITY OF FILMS AND PROVIDE FOR VIEWERS THE FILMS WITH HIGH QUALITY AND GOOD CONTENT
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