Task 2: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Question

Nowadays learning a new language becomes a significant portion in compulsory curriculum. According to many specialists suppose pupils should approach another language as soon as possible from elementary school instead of higher school. In my opinion, students are far better of adapting early another language despite the drawbacks that they will considerably face.

There are certainly a few benefits to learning a foreign language at primary school. The greatest strength of young children for learning new language will is that they pick up language much more easily than teenagers. While growing up progress, their brain is still programmed to acquire both their mother tongue and another language.  As a result, what they learn at this age gets imprinted on their mind and make a background to develop their language ability. Another reason is that children are much more enthusiastic and consciousness to explore and learn some new things at a young age. For example, when parents turn on a video music whose language is different their mother tongue, however, it is very interesting that kids instantly copy and fluently sing despite nobody teach them. This lead to set up the ground for thinking which will help useful in higher level of education for these children. Awareness these benefits as soon as, it is very useful for any students to start learning new language to receive better academic results.

However, learning a new language has still some drawbacks. Firstly, the timetable school require students to put much effort and time consuming in main subjects such as Mathematics, Literatures and History, thus the pupils may haven't any time to do any activities beside their education.  For instance, they can't participant any leisure activities or hang out with friends because they focus amount of time to hard study. Secondly, it is very important to have appropriate method of teaching primary school children. It is fact that teachers have put too much knowledge including vocabulary, grammar and pronunciation to teach primary pupils. This causes unexpected consequences, children become not only hate studying new language but also not keeping learns enthusiasm and progress.

Learning foreign language needs has become incredibly common, especially in initial stages. While young students will experience time and way of education barrier it is in fact that exposing other languages early are better for them in a long way. In my perspective, I am very sure that its advantages would be better than disadvantages.

 

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Answer 1

Nowadays learning a new language becomes a significant portion in compulsory curriculum. According to many specialists, suppose pupils should approach another language as soon as possible WHEN THEY STARTS SCHOOL. In my opinion, students are far better of adapting early TO another language despite the drawbacks that they will considerably face.

There are certainly a few benefits to LEARN a foreign language at primary school. The greatest strength of young children TO LEARN A new language will is that they pick up ON language much more easily than teenagers. While growing up AND PROGRESSING, their brain is still programmed to acquire both their mother tongue and another language.  As a result, what they learn at this age gets imprinted on their mind and make a background to develop their language ability. Another reason is that children are much more enthusiastic and CONSCIOUS OF EXPLORING and LEARNING some new things at a young age. For example, when parents turn on a video music whose language is different FROM their mother tongue, however, it is very interesting that kids instantly copy and fluently sing ALTHOUGH nobody teach them. This lead to SETUP OF the ground for thinking which will BE useful in higher level of education for these children. BEING AWARE OF these benefits SOON, it is very useful for any students to start learning A new language to receive better academic results.

However, learning a new language STILL HAS some drawbacks. Firstly, SCHOOL TIMETABLES require students to put much effort and time consuming in CORE subjects such as Mathematics, LITERATURE and History, thus the pupils may NOT HAVE any time to do any activities beside their education.  For instance, they CAN SCARCELY PARTICIPATE IN SOME leisure activities or hang out with friends because they SPEND AN amount of time STUDYING hard study. Secondly, it is very important to have appropriate METHODS of teaching primary school children A LANGUAGE. It is A fact that teachers have put too MANY THEORIES including vocabulary, grammar and pronunciation to teach primary pupils. This causes unexpected consequences, children become not only OPPOSED TO studying new language but also not keeping LEARNING UNENTHUSIASTICALLY and progress.

Learning A foreign language needs has become incredibly common, especially in initial stages. While young students will experience time and way of education barrier it is in fact that exposing other languages early IS better for them in THE long RUN. In my perspective, I am  sure that its advantages OUTWEIGH ITS  disadvantages .

 

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