Write a request letter to a teacher [closed]

Question

You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to that teacher.

- How you know about the teacher?

-Why you want to learn that language?

-Explain your desire about the course

Dear Ms Anna,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in learning Russian under your guidance and supervisor.

One of my friend, Adam, who is your ex-student, introduces me about you with your effective teaching method , especially in Bussiness Russian. I am very impressed by his fluent speaking and native accent are improved after a shot time. When he share his experiences with me, he say that all the things he has now are taught by you.

With regard to my job, I am going to have a bussiness travel to Russia to meet my clients, but as a matter of fact, I was quite bad in speaking Russian , also in understanding it. I don't want to miss my job therefore I decide to apply for a Russian course which is taught by you.

Fortunately, I live nearby to your house so I can pass-by to discuss about the learning plan if you don't mind that .I desire to become your student very much. Please contact me back soon. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanking you in advance

Yours sincerly,

Maya

 

Mong mọi người góp ý ạ. Mọi ng có thể sửa cho em phần mở được không ạ ?? ( e không biết viết thế nào cho hay nữa  :(( ) Em cảm ơn ạ. (P/S: đây chỉ là 1 phần trong bài thi vào 10 thôi ạ, ko phải thi chứng chỉ

Answer 1

Hello bạn, lại là mình đây !!! hehe.

1. nếu ex-student của bạn ở đây là hs cũ thì mình suggest dùng former student nhen.

2. When he shareS : THIẾU S

3 he sayS: THIÊU S NÈ

4 I was quite bad in speaking Russian , also in understanding it.-> My ablity to communicate in Russian is poor.

5  I decide to apply for a Russian course which is taught by you.- > apply for your Russian course đc rồi hen.

6 discuss ko có preporsition đằng sau; discuss something

7 Thank you in advance: ko có thanking đâu nhé

MÌnh thấy mở bài OK nên ko biết sửa gì, sr nha