Social network addiction is a common problem nowadays. What are the potential causes and possible effects of it?

Question

It is evident that social network addiction is a popular problem nowadays. I am of the opinion that this is caused by a number of factors and leads to many negative effects.

There are some reasons why social network addiction occurs rapidly nowadays. Firstly, the pressure come from family about learn made us more and more abuse social network. For example, if we get low points, parents will laugh with us that do not need reason. Sencondly, we find sympathy for ourself to receive care from everyone but we do not know that is not trust. For instance, now young people often online Facebook to say themself, share status of them.

There are some serious effects of social network addiction nowadays. For these reason, it leads to serious bad health as insomnia. For example, we can stay up still midnight to use social network. We can see that when entering the cafe, everyone do not to talk together but hold the smartphone to online  Facebook, Instagram, Youtube... . For instance, statistics have shown that Viet Nam is in the top 10 of the World using social networks a lot.

In conlusion, use correct way and should not abuse it.

Answer 1

It is evident that social network addiction is a popular problem nowadays. I am of the opinion that this phenomenon is caused by a number of factors and leads to many negative effects.

There are some reasons why social network addiction occurs rapidly (is ubiquitous) nowadays.(these days). Firstly, the pressure come (coming) from family (families) about learn (learning) made (make) us more and more abuse social network. For example, if we (students) get low points, their parents will laugh with us them that do not need without needing any reasons. Sencondly, we find sympathy for ourself to receive care from everyone but we do not know that is not trust whether it is truth or not. For instance, now young people often online Facebook to say themself, share status of them. (end results)

There are some serious effects of social network addiction nowadays (lặp từ). For these reason, it (engaging excessively in social network) leads to serious bad health problems as insomnia. For example, we can stay up still (until) midnight to use social network. We can see that when entering the cafe, everyone do not to talk together but hold (holding) the smartphone to online  Facebook, Instagram or Youtube... (không dùng trong writing). For instance, statistics have shown that Viet Nam is in the top 10 of the World using social networks a lot (informal)

In conlusion, use correct way and should not abuse it.

In conclusion, spending time too much on using social media can do more harm than good. By considering all the pros and cons, users will use social network appropriately.

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Comments

Thank for your comment.

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ah bạn ơi laugh at sb chứ ko phải laugh with nha

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Ok mình biết rồi, cảm ơn bạn nhiều nhé.