Biodiversity

Question

    Up to now, biological diversity has been a complicated issue in the world. Government almost earns a large amount of money from a great deal of valuable species exploitation hence the number of species of plants, animals, and microorganisms is dropping significantly.As individuals or organizations,we must attempt to find approriate preservation and sustainable development strategies in order to maintain biodiversity

 

 

 

 

  

We take advantage of the benefits' biodiversity  about  aspects such as: ecosystem services, biological resources and social benefits.For example, vegetation helps regulate underground water tables and prevent dryland salinity which affects vast areas of Australia agriculture lands.Biological diversity helps in the formation and maintenance of soil structure and the retention of moisture and nutrient levels. Besides,it also brings us the biological resources  by providing food, medicinal resources and wood products

 

According to my analysis in terms of the pros of biodiversity, we can realise the importance of it. Yet an increasing  number of species are in jeopardy and  perhaps become extinct.What can be done to maintain biodiversity while scientists are researching the solution?.Firstly,we can participate in biodiversity conservation by increasing the knowledge of environment or the awarness of the impacts' biological variety loss.It is said that the disappearance of a plenty of species due to partial human hence government should creat  proper protected area where human activities are limited is the best way to prevent deforestation and exploitation organisms and the resources human need to survive.Global warming is considered one of the elements that give rise to species' extinction.It makes some animals have to change their habitat , become"homeless"; so human do not do harm to environment by burning or devastating anything belong to nature

 

In conclusion, the more people know the biodiversity loss, the more they will be prepared to help slow it. I think we must appreciate the benefits of biological variety which are at stake

 

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Answer 1

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vegetation helps regulate underground water tables and prevent dryland salinity which affects vast areas of Australia agriculture lands.=> vegetation helps regulate underground water tables and prevent dryland salinity in wide areas ofAustralia agricultural lands

the biological resources=> biological resourses

biodiversity conservation=> biological conservations

the awarness of the impacts' biological variety loss=> the awarness of the result of losing biological variety 

Hence=thus, You should have (,) before hence

(Long sentence): cut it like : the disappearance of a plenty of species due to partial human, hence government should properly creat protective areas to limit humane activities. This will be the best way to prevent deforestation and exploitation organisms so that  people's resourses need to survive.

.Global warming is considered one of the elements that give rise to species' extinction => is considered as one of the elements that gives a rise to ..............

It makes some animals have to change their habitat , become"homeless"; so human do not do harm to environment by burning or devastating anything belong to nature => It makes some animals have a change into their habitats and even become"homeless". Thefore, human don't  harm to environment by burning or devastating anything belonging to nature

the biological loss=> biological loss

the more they will be prepared to help slow it=>  the more they are equipped  deep knowledge to cope with this