[Academic] Writing Task 1: Bar Chart [closed]

Question

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

 

The bar chart illustrates the quantity of male and female learners attending in continuing education under full-time or part-time curriculum in Britain during three 2-year periods of time each decade from 1970/71 to 1990/91.

On an overview, throughout the time, there was a strong increase in the number of studying participants and the majority of both men and women students partook in part-time course for further education.

In part-time category, on the first period 1970/71, men students’ total number surpassed the women students’ by nearly 250 thousand. The next two periods witnessed a surprising change, from about 750 thousand of female students initially, it burgeoned to 1100 thousand during 1990/91.

In fulltime category, it is clearly whether men or women students, during the time, the quantity were in range of 100 to 250 thousand only to compare to part-time area. The rise happened with men course attendant’s number exceeded women course attendant’s little. The figures of male pupils rose from 100 to 250 thousand, while the statistics of female pupils significantly surged from 50 to 250 thousand.

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Answer 1

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