talk about your family and use relative clause

Question

 

My family

If you ask me " what is the most important thing in your whole life", I will immediatetly answer you that is my family where I can be myselft. There are 5 people including me in my family: my grandmother, my parents and  my younger sister who is closest with me.  I love my grandmother whose hair is white and skin is wrinkled the most. She always told me fairy tales when i was a child before i went to sleep but now when she is quite old, she does not do that anymore. About mom and dad, who are not only my parents but also my friends. They usually give me helpful and honest advices when i be sad or make misstake that is the reasons why i like sharing everything surrounding me to them who love me than anything. The next member in my family is my sister who is 8 years younger than me whose face is really cute special when she smiles. We used to fight with each other everytime when we were the children but now we just do it sometimes. My younger sister whose hobby is listening to music in her room where she can sing out loud and dace crazily as a mental patient. And the last person is me who is the most talkative in our house. I graduated from the university already so now i am looking for a job. Almost dinner, my family  enjoy our meal together that is the most interesting perious time of day for me. In conclusion, my family is of  fundamental important with me which always supports to me and love me without conditions.

 

Answer 1

- Bạn nên kiểm tra chính tả của mình và lưu ý cách sử dụng từ " I ".

*Chúc bạn thành công !

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If you ask me " what is the most important thing in your whole life", I will immediatetly => immediately answer you that is my family where I can be myselft => myself . There are 5 people including me in my family: my grandmother, my parents and  my younger sister who is closest with => to me.  I love my grandmother whose hair is white and skin is wrinkled the most. She always told me fairy tales when i => I was a child before i => I went to sleep but now when she is quite old, she does not do that anymore. About mom and dad, who are not only my parents but also my friends. They usually give me helpful and honest advices => advice when i => I be => am sad or make misstake => making mistakes that is => are the reasons why i => I like sharing everything surrounding me to them who love me than anything. The next member in my family is my sister who is 8 years younger than me whose face is really cute special when she smiles. We used to fight with each other everytime => every time when we were the children but now we just do it sometimes. My younger sister whose hobby is listening to music in her room where she can sing out loud and dace => dance crazily as a mental patient. And the last person is me who is the most talkative in our house. I graduated from the university already so now i => I am looking for a job. Almost dinner, my family  enjoy our meal together that is the most interesting perious => precious  time of day for me. In conclusion, my family is of  fundamental important => importance with me which always supports to me and love me without conditions.

Answer 2

Từ  immediatetly bạn viết chưa đúng => immediately

Tương tự myselft => myself

closest = the closest

I love my grandmother whose hair is white and skin is wrinkled the most. => I love my grandmother the most whose hair is white and skin is wrinkled.