do you like doing volunteer work? what kind of volunteer work have you participted?

Question

Volunteer is one of popular activities in all countries of the world. There are many type: helping poor person, helping orphanchildren, clean street,... But in my childhood, i have took part in helping orphan children.

    when i was twelve, my school organised a trip to orphanage in HCM city, so i joined. We spent three hours going there. when we arrived, we were shared multiple job. My job wasplaying, speaking about and sharing the life with childrens.

   I enjoy this volunteer so much. because it made me feel a sense of happiness and have more friends. Specially, i love my life more when i knew many people less fortunate than me. Beside, volunteering is way to help me develope important social skills and experiences, so i feel confident myself.

  in conclusion, above all things, i volunteer because i see myself and the other volunteers have a same thoughts: " some of the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others

Answer 1

In all countries of the world-> in almost countries on the world

Clean(line 2)  -> cleaning

A trip to ophanage (line 4)-> a trip to visit the ophanage

Sharing the life(line 6)-> error and not clear

Enjoy (line 8)-> participate in (avoid againing)

Volunteering (10) -> volunteer

Develop important social -> not clear