Mọi người chấm hộ mình bài task 1 trong IELTS Practice Plus 2

Question

 

Answer: 

The map illustrates how significant a small fishing village has become a large tourist destination throughout 30 years from 1974 to 2004.

Overall, it is clear to see that a small rural area has developed dramatically into a big coastal city where there have numerous of high building. The seashore in the West and the East appear many hotels and services. The beach in front of it also became swimming location. Woodland in the west is constructed to be a golf course. Next to it, the old village is now also a place for tourists to shop. In the center, old olives farm is expanded to be a large farmland where grow fruits and vegetables for hotels. Beside, a new road has been built to link the nearby village to the shore.

Whereas, the center fishing village didn't see large changes. It is where most of local people's home located. The  most obvious  change is that the previous harbour is deconstructed to be the beach. 

Answer 1

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-Đ1 nên viết là: The maps illustrate the transformation of an area from a small fishing village into an European tourist resort after 30 years from 1974 to 2004.