Bài IELTS task 1

Question

 

THE GRAPH SHOWS THE UNEMPLOYMENT RATES IN THE US AND JAPAN BETWEEN MARCH 1993 AND MARCH 1999.

 ESSAY:

                  The line graph provided illustrates data concerning the percentage of unemployment in two countries, the United States and Japan, over a period from March 1993 to March 1999.

                     As can be seen from the graph, The US experienced a remarkable decline while Japan witnessed a wild increase in the unemployment rate during the given time scale.

                 Starting at 2.5% in March 1993, the figure for Japan then rocketed to around 3.75% one year later. This was followed by a period of constant growth, with the rate reaching a peak of over 5.0% in 1998, before falling slightly to finish the period at five percent in March 1999.

                Meanwhile, a staggering 7.0% was the starting point of the US's rate in March 1993. However, the following years marked a period of dramatic decrease in the percentage of workforce in the US, before seeing a low of just 5.0% in March 1999, the same finishing point as Japan.

Answer 1

The line graph provided illustrates data concerning the percentage of unemployment in two countries, namely the United States and Japan, over a 6-year period from March 1993 to March 1999.

Overall/General speaking, As can be seen from the graph, The US experienced a remarkable decline while Japan witnessed a wild increase in the unemployment rate during the given time scale.

Starting at 2.5% in March 1993, the figure for Japan then rocketed to around 3.75% one year later. This was followed by a period of constant growth, with the rate reaching a peak of over 5.0% in 1998, before falling slightly to finish the period at five percent in March 1999.

 Meanwhile, a staggering 7.0% was the starting point of the US's rate in March 1993. However, the following years marked a period of dramatic decrease in the percentage of workforce in the US, before seeing a low of just 5.0% in March 1999, the same finishing point as Japan.

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