It is generally thought that school is a place providing knowledge for every person. Besides this, it is important that school teach their students living skills to improve themselves completely câu này sai ngữ pháp, bạn có thể nhận thấy và sửa nhé. And in my opinion, working in group is a basic competence for students to learn at schools. câu thứ hai "a basic competence" dùng chưa đúng ý lắm, competence thường là ability hay nói về thẩm quyền của toà án hơn là ý trong câu, bạn có thể chỉnh thành a basic principle hay rule thì phù hợp.
The reason why I think co-operative skill should be taught for students at schools is that it is very necessary for their study and daily life in our society nowadays. Firstly, being taught how to cooperate with others helps students a lot with their study Bạn nên viết thành câu trọn vẹn có chủ ngữ rõ ràng chứ bạn phan thẳng như thế đọc có vẻ cụt. Working in team (bạn nên tìm một từ nào đồng nghĩa với từ co-operation chứ đừng dùng dạng working in a group rồi sau đó lại working in a team, chưa advanced words lắm) is the best way to solve an difficult issue (thường khi đề cập giải quyết khó khăn thì thường là giải quyết nhiều khó khăn chứ đâu chỉ một khó khăn, mà bạn dùng an difficult issue cũng sai, có thể bạn dùng những từ advanced hơn như dilemma trong câu thì điểm cao hơn đấy) because when children works (children là số nhiều rồi thì work phải chia khác chứ) as a team, many different ideas will be given and everyone will discuss together to meet common consent, so the most suitable solution will be chosen for each situation. Moreover, working in group (lặp lại, why do not you use another way to perfrom the same idea as colloboration as an example) is an opportunity for each student to improve him or herself. When you consult with your friends about some problems, such as geometry or physics ones, you would take advantage of the skills and knowledge of your partners. As a result, your level and skill would be advanced quickly and you would be better. Secondly, teamwork is also helpful in our daily life. Thanks to cooperation, teenagers would build their new connections and improve their current relationships. Therefore, when you are in troubles, your friends will not leave you alone as well as help you to find a solution to overcome. In addition, co-operation plays an important role in success of a team in general and every member in particular in a competition. Football, for example, is one of the sports that extremely need co-operation. In a football match, if a team wants to be the winner, every members (every số ít cơ mà) of a team have to (chia sai ngữ pháp) not only work together to attack and score, but also co-operate in defense to keep clean sheet. The winner would be the team having good coordination between their players, and the team do not have that would lose, of course. (dùng obviously or apparently sẽ better)
However, work together (dùng cách khác đi mà ) is sometimes disadvantaged. When you work in a team, you cannot show off yourself to prove that you are better than the others or how the best you are. In addition, if a student only know how to co-operate with partners to work out a problem, he or she would be dependent of the others (sai cấu trúc dependent on the others), and in emergency situations, they cannot manage to get over.
In conclusion, the young should be taught basic skills at schools to perfect themselves and co-operation is the most important competence which is necessary for each person in Globalization and International Economic Integration these days.
Mình đọc sơ qua thôi nhưng về cơ bản là hơi sai nhiều lỗi, thiếu rất nhiều yếu tố về ngôn từ, structure. But you should not care about any abovementioned mistakes because I am still a mistaker like you. Keep up with!