My mother. (paragraph about 140 words) [closed]

Question

Nothing in the world can compare with the true love and care of my mother. Since the very first moment opening my eyes, I has been brought up in her arms day in day out. Never can I find the apt words to describe all trouble that she have faced up to in order to take care of me and give the greatest thing to me. Therefore, she is the first person to come up my mind whenever I have a diffculty. Moreover, she has taught me all I need to know to become a good girl. Of all them, the most important thing she offers to me, perhaps, is how to give and take. I learned from her that giving is a lot harder than taking, but the former is much more satisfying when it is done. In short, she is so important to me that I can’t live without her. 

Answer 1

- Bạn sai lỗi cơ bản về thì sau "since + Mệnh đề quá khứ" -

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