Write a paraghaph of about 140 words to answer the following question "How significant is the coming examination to you?"

Question

The coming examination is very importan And necessary to me. Firstly, it is the best way lead to my future. If I want to achive my dream, I should comlpete this examination as good as I can. By getting high score in the coming examination, I can have a good chance to apply for the good university in Vietnam. Secondly, the coming examination provides me many learning's skills and tips to study effectivel.  It also help me be used to working under pressure and builds strong mind. "No pain, no gain", say a proverb. In sum, the coming examination is the decisive battle in my whole student life and I will try my best to get the good result in this examinatio.

Answer 1

Đầu tiên bạn nên xem lại ngữ pháp như :   thecoming examination provides me many learning's skills and tips to study effectively.----> the coming examination provides me with many learning skills to sudy more effectively

In sum, the coming examination is the decisive battle in my whole student life and I will try my best to get the good result in this examination ---> in conclusion,  the coming examination is one of the most decisive battles in my whole student life and I will try my best to get the good result in this examination.

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Answer 2

_ VĂn Phong còn "việt" quá bạn ạ... 

_ Một số lỗi ngữ pháp như:

 +Firstly, it is the best way lead to my future. =>> to lead, hoặc hay hơn thì dùng câu nhấn mạnh it is ...that và thay cụm lead to my future thành offer a source of merits to me in the future

+ It also help me be used to w......=>>>> help thiếu "s".

+ Tránh câu đơn, cụt ý: "No pain, no gain", say a proverb