[Descriptive Paragraph] Academic Writing

Question

A Nice Place

My dormitory room on the fourth floors of the building, is a particularly convenient and good option for students to stay. My dormitory can offer me everything I need for student life: peace and quiet for study, services for daily chores, and shared fun with fellow students. When you walk into my room, you will see a tiny room surrounded by the white wall, two green ceiling-pans and three power-saving light bulbs above your head. Along the left and right side are six twin beds with student table that join nicely with bed. Each bed contain neatly placed pillows and quilts. Next to the bed are our two big metal closet with twelve drawers for each member. In the middle of the room are two wooden desks with metal chairs. Underneath the desks contain plastic bowls, instant noodles and other object. Opposite to the green doors are other room, which has two bathroom and two toilet. We washing and drying clothes in balcony rear the room.. All the things in our dormitory room seem to be in harmony with the room and also make this it lovelier and warmer. Every time I enter our room, I feel relaxed and happy

 

Answer 1

My dormitory room on the fourth floors of the building, is a particularly convenient and good option for students to stay. My dormitory can offer me everything I need for student life: peace and quiet for study, services for daily chores, and shared fun with fellow students. When you walk into my room, you will see a tiny room surrounded by the white wall, two green ceiling-pans and three power-saving light bulbs above your head. Along the left and right side are six twin beds with student table that join nicely with bed. Each bed contain neatly placed pillows and quilts. Next to the bed are our two big metal closet with twelve drawers for each member. In the middle of the room are two wooden desks with metal chairs. Underneath the desks contain plastic bowls, instant noodles and other object. Opposite to the green doors are other room, which has two bathroom and two toilet. We washing and drying clothes in balcony rear the room.. All the things in our dormitory room seem to be in harmony with the room and also make this it lovelier and warmer. Every time I enter our room, I feel relaxed and happy.

 

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