topic:the cost of living is higher in many countries. Write a paragraph (150-180 words) about what are the solutions to deal with this problem?

Question

People these days must face a dramatic increase in cost of living, which has negative effects on both society and perspectives. Rising expenditure can cause health problems and pressure on low wages people. One possible solution is to migrate to other global countries, especially in developing nations, which have a lower cost compared to their host countries. For instance, currently, people who live in the USA have a tendency to move to VietNam. So that they could earn money easily and reduce living expenses such as house rent, electricity bills, health care, and so on.However, this migration trend may result in disrupting national security, or people in other countries can suffer from cultural shock. The best remedy is that the government should curb the tax along with grant more tax incentives, which will be able to generate a higher income of the business world. This suggestion is a useful tool for helping people to afford the higher prices in the shops and allow them to buy the essential things. In conclusion, individuals should pay money properly to reduce the weight of all household bills and responsibilities

Answer 1

People these days must (are likely to) face a dramatic increase in cost of living, which has negative effects on both society and perspectives. Rising expenditure can cause health problems and pressure on low wages (low-wage [a] used to describe jobs or places in which workers are paid little) people. One possible solution is to migrate to other global countries, especially in developing nations, which have a lower cost compared to their host countries. For instance, currently, people who live in the USA have a tendency to move to VietNam. So that they could earn money easily and reduce living expenses such as house rent, electricity bills, health care, and so on. However, this migration trend may result in disrupting national security, or people in other countries can suffer from cultural (culture) shock. The best remedy is that the government should curb the tax along with grant more tax incentives, which will be able to generate a higher income of the business world. This suggestion is a useful tool for helping people to afford the higher prices in the shops and allow them to buy the essential things. In conclusion, individuals should pay money properly to reduce the weight of all household bills and responsibilities.

Answer 2

People these days must (không nên dùng "must'' để khẳng định facts) face a dramatic increase in cost of living ,which has  ( leading to) negative detrimental/side (effects on both society and perspectives. Rising expenditure can cause health problems and pressure (put more pressures) on low wages people (low-wage job/ countries => low income people ) . One possible solution is to migrate to other global countries, especially in developing nations, which have a lower cost compared to their host countries. For instance, currently, people who live in the USA have a tendency to move to VietNam. So that they could earn money easily and reduce living expenses such as house rent, electricity bills, health care, and so on.However, this migration trend may result in disrupting national security, or people in other countries can suffer from cultural culture shock. The best remedy is that the government should curb the tax along with grant more tax incentives, which will be able to generate a higher income of the business world. This suggestion is a an useful tool for helping  facilitating people to afford the higher prices in the shops and allow them to buy the essential things. In conclusion, individuals should pay money properly to reduce the weight of all household bills and responsibilities