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I enjoyed the dishes made from chicken, but fried chicken wings with fish sauce is the one, that I like the most. This one is a Vietnamese food and often appears in daily meals. Ingredients for making this food are very to find, and as the name of it, we can not lack two main ingredients, that are chicken wings and fish sauce. Besides that, we need something such as cooking oil, garlic, chili, pepper, sugar, and water. Especially, chicken in the white meat group, so when eating chicken, help people feel comfortable and reduce stress, after a hard-working day. Experts have studied that eating chicken can reduce the risk of depression, improve the mood of patients. Thus, the nutritional value in chicken wings gives you a healthy heart. Therefore, I am a big fan of this dish, it is partly textured and partly flavor. they are sweet, spicy and a little salty. Textured colors are immensely eye-catching. Moreover, I love it, for this dish is simple to prepare and does not too much time. You should eat fried chicken wings with fish sauce if you have never eaten it. This food you eat with white rice is yummy. That's all.
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I enjoyed the dishes made from chicken, but fried chicken wings with fish sauce is the one, that I like the most. This one is a Vietnamese food and often appears in daily meals. Ingredients for making this food are very to find, and as the name of it, we can not lack two main ingredients, that are chicken wings and fish sauce. Besides that, we need something such as cooking oil, garlics, chilis, peppers, sugars, and water. Especially, chicken in the white meat group, so when eating chicken, help people feel comfortable and reduce stress, after a hard-working day. Experts have studied that eating chicken can reduce the risk of depression, improve the mood of patients. Thus, the nutritional value in chicken wings gives you a healthy heart. Therefore, I am a big fan of this dish, it is partly textured and partly flavor. they are sweet, spicy and a little salty. Textured colors are immensely eye-catching. Moreover, I love it, for this dish is simple to prepare and does not too much time. You should eat fried chicken wings with fish sauce if you have never eaten it. This food you eat with white rice is yummy. I love this so much so you should try it . 

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I enjoyed the dishes made from chicken, but fried chicken wings with fish sauce is the one, that I like the most. This one is a Vietnamese food and often appears in daily meals. Ingredients for making this food are very (?) to find, and as the name of it, we can not lack two main ingredients, that are chicken wings and fish sauce. Besides that, we need something - mình nghĩ là không nên dùng sth such as cooking oil, garlic, chili, pepper, sugar, and water. Especially, chicken in the white meat group, so ( khi dùng so rồi thì nên + clause hơn là cách bạn dùng) when eating chicken, help people feel comfortable and reduce stress, after a hard-working day. Experts have studied that eating chicken can reduce the risk of depression, improve the mood of patients. Thus, the nutritional value in chicken wings gives you a healthy heart. Therefore, I am a big fan of this dish, it is partly textured and partly flavor. they are sweet, spicy and a little salty. Textured colors are immensely eye-catching. Moreover, I love it, for this dish is simple to prepare and does not -spend - too much time. You should eat fried chicken wings with fish sauce if you have never eaten it. This food you eat with white rice is yummy. That's all.

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