The two charts require the information of grown-up education. The bar graph demonstrates 7 different reasons why adults pursue education at their age. The second chart shows how the surveyees think their education expenses should be allocated. -> information, an education.
To begin with (According to the first chart - ) , the most significant causes for the action of attending course at a much older age are their enthusiasm in particular subject and to achieve more ability needing, reported at 40 percent and 38 percent, respectively. 22 percent of people think that this education are neccesary because of the more knowledge and experience for their present professions. The percentage of one fifth is the proportion for both the aspect of better advancement and the satisfaction in gaining knowledge. The others are smaller quantities, having more chances in changing occupation (12 percent) and to widen their communication (9 percent).-> a course, is necessary
Having a look at the pie chart,(Move to the pie chart) it is clearly seen that 40 percent, the largest number, have a desire to be shared the tuition in privacy. A bit smaller of percentage by 5 percent is accounted to employer and a quarter of the cost is shared by taxpayer. -> the taxpayer
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