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We always know that English is popular worldwide because it is an international language.There is no denying the fact that English plays an important role in our lives life,so that, a lot of people learn English as the following reasons:
Firstly,E English (Văn viết ko được viết tắt nhé) helps us not only improve friendship but also in communication.Furthermore,learning E is a way to communicate with the people all over the world so that we will have a wider friendship around the world.
Secondly,E helps us to connect our country to the word.If we know E,we can introduce our beautiful things,places,… to international friends.Moreover,E also widen our knowledge with various things we have ever known in our lives life.
Thirdly,E is considered as a key to success.Being good at E is mean (hai động từ ko đi cùng nhau nhé) getting a good jb job with high salary and position in a big company.Also,if we know E,we can travel a lot without worr E ying about language .
Finally,knowing English,we will have more and more chances to studying aboard.Studying aboard is the dream of many people in Vietnam or in the orther small countries.So why don’t we make our dream come true ?
Overall,because E is very important so that we must try our best to learn and master English.