IELTS Task 2- environment

Question

Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

People have different views with regard to the question of how to reduce air contamination. While universal car free days might help reduce air pollution effectively, I do believe that there are several other no less important ways to minimize air pollution.

The reason why international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution is that cars are the major means of transportation. In fact, millions of tons of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases are released to the environment by using car every year. These harmful chemicals would contaminate the atmosphere, decreasing air quality dramatically. Therefore, using public transportation instead of driving car would improve air quality in long term.

In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that there are more beneficial  solutions to tackle air pollution rather than international car free days.  Firstly, government could take drastic measure to protect and improve air quality. For instance, heavy taxes should be imposed on car drivers to force them switch from using their own cars to using public transportation.  Secondly, mineral companies must stop the exploitation of fossil fuel. Finally, citizens should be encouraged to not only use environmentally friendly chemicals but also grow more trees to make the environment stress-free.

In conclusion, although I recognize the good impacts of global car free days on the air quality, I still believe that there are more helpful ways to protect the air than global car free days.

Answer 1

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People have different views with regard to the question of how to reduce air contamination. While universal car free days might help reduce air pollution effectively, I do believe that there are several other no less important ways to minimize air pollution.

The reason why international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution is that cars are the major means of transportation. In fact, millions of tons of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases are released to the environment by using car every year. These harmful chemicals would contaminate the atmosphere, decreasing air quality dramatically. Therefore, using public transportation instead of driving car would improve air quality in long term.

In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that there are more beneficial  solutions to tackle air pollution rather than international car free days.  Firstly, government could take drastic measure to protect and improve air quality. For instance, heavy taxes should be imposed on car drivers to force them switch from using their own cars to using public transportation.  Secondly, mineral companies must stop the exploitation of fossil fuel. Finally, citizens should be encouraged to not only use environmentally friendly chemicals but also grow more trees to make the environmentstress-free.

In conclusion, although I recognize the good impacts of global car free days on the air quality, I still believe that there are more helpful ways to protect the air than global car free days.

Answer 2

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People have different views with regard to the question of how to reduce air contamination. While universal car free days might help reduce air pollution effectively, I do believe that there are several other no less important ways to minimize air pollution.

The reason why international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution is that cars are the major means of transportation. In fact, millions of tons of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases are released to the environment by using car every year. These harmful chemicals would contaminate the atmosphere, decreasing air quality dramatically. Therefore, using public transportation instead of driving car would improve air quality in long term.

In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that there are more beneficial  solutions to tackle air pollution rather than international car free days.  Firstly, government could take drastic measure to protect and improve air quality. For instance, heavy taxes should be imposed on car drivers to force them switch from using their own cars to using public transportation.  Secondly, mineral companies must stop the exploitation of fossil fuel. Finally, citizens should be encouraged to not only use environmentally friendly chemicals but also grow more trees to make the environment stress-free.

In conclusion, although I recognize the good impacts of global car free days on the air quality, I still believe that there are more helpful ways to protect the air than global car free days.