Bai Task 2- Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree

Question

Nowadays, thanks to the development of advanced of technology, surfing the Internet in search of information seems to be a human common practice, especially students. However, I believe that the libraries still maintain their indispensable role in student's life.

obviously, there are some compelling reasons why online tools provides students with a variety of benefits. Firstly, it is easy and convenient for students to access the online information only by a click the mouse button on Internet-connected devices such as laptops, smartphones or tablets,..., instead of spending several hours on finding books in libraries. Secondly, by dint of the diversity of the Internet information, which can bestow upon students having more opportunities in opting the suitable information.

on the other hand, I am persuaded that libraries are irreplaceable. The most significant reason is that the information in libraries is carefully verified and selected. Thus, students only keep it in their mind without pondering on the trust of the information likes the information in the internet. In addition, libraries can bring the ideal studying environment for students by virtue of their seriousness and quietness, so whenever the students want to have places to study and get the information, the library is the best choice.

in conclusions, although the Intener has excessive advantages in search of the information, I am of the opinion that libraries play a necessary part in the modern world, especially student's world.

Answer 1

obviously, there are some compelling reasons why online tools provides students with a variety of benefits. Firstly, it is easy and convenient for students to access the online information only by a click the mouse button on Internet-connected devices such as laptops, smartphones or tablets,..., instead of spending several hours on finding books in libraries. Secondly, by dint of the diversity of the Internet information, which can bestow upon students having more opportunities in opting the suitable information

i think you should use '' at your fingertips '' instead of " by a click the mouse button on internet""

you shoud not use obviously because it sounds not academic at all

do not use firstly. instead " first and foremost"

Answer 2

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Nowadays, thanks to the development of advanced of technology, surfing the Internet in search of information seems to be a human common practice, especially students. However, I believe that the libraries still maintain their indispensable role in student's life.

obviously, there are some compelling reasons why online tools provides students with a variety of benefits. Firstly, it is easy and convenient for students to access the online information only by a click the mouse button on Internet-connected devices such as laptops, smartphones or tablets,..., instead of spending several hours on finding books in libraries. Secondly, by dint of the diversity of the Internet information, which can bestow upon students having more opportunities in opting the suitable information.

on the other hand, I am persuaded that libraries are irreplaceable. The most significant reason is that the information in libraries is carefully verified and selected. Thus, students only keep it in their mind without pondering on the trust of the information likes the information in the internet. In addition, libraries can bring the ideal studying environment for students by virtue of their seriousness and quietness, so whenever the students want to have places to study and get the information, the library is the best choice.

in conclusions, although the Intener has excessive advantages in search of the information, I am of the opinion that libraries play a necessary part in the modern world, especially student's world.