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Since i was a child i have always dreaming of become a psycho doctor .i was still trying to study hard to make my dream come true.but when i leaves the high school my parent couter me become a psycho doctor so i hold tight my dream for myself .i like psycho doctor because i like listen the people with problem of them and i love to  understanding other people.

Answer 1

Since i was a child i have always dreamed about becoming a psychological doctor .i was still trying to study hard to make my dream come true.but when i leaves the high school my parent couter(?) me become a psychological  doctor so i hold tight my dream for myself .i like to be a psychological doctor because i like listen the people with their problem of them and i love to understanding other people.

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Answer 3

Since I was a child I have always dreamed of becoming a psychological doctor. I was still trying to study hard to make my dream come true. But when I left the high school my parent counter me becoming a psychological doctor so I hold tightly my dream for myself. I like being a psychological doctor because I like listening to people with their problems and I love understanding others.

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