Bài TOEFL Task 2- introduction- do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games teaches us about life.

Question

Computer games are a vital part of our lives.  They have been playing an important role in a great deals of aspects such as entertainment and relaxation. Some people say that education also needs computer games. However, in my point of view, they should not be used as lessons for learners because they drive people into impractical thoughts, unbeneficial habits and unethical behaviours.

Answer 1

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Comments

it is only an introduction.