Writing task 2 - Aug/ 4th- parent and school with the behavior of children

Question

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

It is said that raising children is the most difficult process in the world. There has been a debate on who will nurture the child. Many people believe that school is responsible for bringing up good kids while others think that this is the job of parents.

To begin with, most of views emphasis parental duties toward their offspring. They spend greatest of time with parents and learn from them. This brings advantages in the education of a child. Not only that, there are evidences that children imitate actions of elders. Hence, parents not just teach kids but also improve themselves. For example, by telling family’s history or educational stories, a juvenile can easily learn about good behaviors.

Oppositely, some people opine that the learning of good actions should be done in schools. Firstly, school is a convenient environment for children to learn not only knowledge but also behavior. Kids can get these from their teachers or friends. Additionally, children who make mistakes are allowed to correct them. They can also be motivated by awards at school.

In conclusion, the personality development of a child needs coordination between home and schools to enrich his skills and polite attitude.

Answer 1

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

It is said that raising children is the most always a difficult process issue that triggers conflicting opinions in the world. There has been a debate on who will nurture the child. Many people believe that school is responsible for bringing up good kids while others think that this is the job of parents.

p/s: mình nghĩ phần mở bài thêm cả cái opinion của bản thân nữa nha. 

To begin with, most of views emphasise parental duties toward their offspring. They Children are said to spend greatest time with parents and easily mimic what they behave learn from them.  As a result, parents play a vital role in setting good examples for their kids and help them see the values of life. This brings advantages in the education of a child's mind and physical body. Moreover, there are evidences is evidence that children imitate actions of elders. Hence, parents do not just teach their kids but also improve themselves. For example, by telling family’s history or educational stories, a juvenile can easily learn about good behaviors.

evidence không đếm được nha.

Mình có 1 vd thay thế bạn coi đc k nha: by attaching great importance to working hard, doing one's best and taking pride in one's work, a juvenile can easily attain success at his future career

 

Answer 2