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It has been argued that computers are the most crucial creation of the last hundred years. From my perspective, I advocate this statement to a certain extent.

There are many reasons why people of the opinion that computers play an indispensable part in our life. Firstly, because the computer acts as a labor-saving device, it reduces human efforts in various activities. Gone are the days when people have to spend a lot of time calculating. These days, with the help of computers, people take this just in a few seconds. Additionally, it also helps people to save money. Without costing a penny to commute, people can stay at home to deal with their work with a mouse click. Another benefit is that human beings can broaden their knowledge. Due to the incredible capacity to store data, computers assist people in studying, teaching, and researching effectively.

On the other hand, I believe that there are a couple of inventions far more significant. One of these inventions is the Internet. In fact, these days, to work efficiently, most technological devices need to connect to the Internet. For example, people can only make a video call or send an e-mail to whom is far away by a computer connected to the Internet. The second one that should be mentioned is the advent of planes. An airplane can transport a large group of individuals or freight in a relatively short amount of time. That contributes to the development of transportation.

In conclusion, although computers are necessary for our life, I think that there are other inventions that have been more vital.
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It has been argued that computers are the most crucial creation of the last hundred years  (century). From my perspective, I advocate this statement to a certain extent.

There are many( several)reasons why people of the opinion that computers play an indispensable part in our life( Câu này lạc đề) people support the idea that the advent of computer is the most paramount invention of humanity. Firstly, because the computer acts as a labor-saving device, it reduces human efforts in various activities such as calculating,typing words,etc . Gone are the days when people have to spend a lot of time calculating. These days, with the help of computers, it just takes people a few minutes to handle with mathematics. Additionally, it also helps people to save their time and money with telework. Without costing a penny to commute, people can stay at home to deal with their work with a mouse click. Another benefit is that human beings can easily broaden their knowledge by using computers searching for up-to-date information, work materials. Due to the incredible capacity to store data, computers assist people in a lot of fields like studying, teaching, and researching effectively.

On the other hand, I believe that there are a couple of inventions far more significant. One of these inventions is the Internet. In fact, these days, to work efficiently, almost technological devices need to connect to the Internet. For example, people can only make a video call or send an e-mail to whom is far away by a computer connected to the Internet. The second one that should be mentioned is the advent of planes. An airplane can transport a large group of individuals or freight in a relatively short amount of time ,which contributes greatly to the development of transportation.

In conclusion, although computers are necessary for our life, I think that there are other inventions that have been more vital.

You should try to elaborate more your ideas and use complex sentences.

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