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TV programes have been popular in the word over several decades which contain abundant and divese contents related to a large number of different areas like films, music, talk show. It is argued that nowadays young generation have taken much time to watch TV as well as use less time for doing physical activities. This essay will look at main reasons why children waste a plenty of time in watching TV and solution to handle these problems, focussing on role of family and lifestyle of teenager.

There are two main reasons which can be considered to be a factor contribution in these issues. Firstly, in modern life, most of parents are so extremely busy for their job that they don’t have enough extra attention for their children. Apparently, this result in children can watch TV for a long time, which can not be controled by their parent. Secondly, After a period of time keeping watch on TV, children can not arrange their time to engage in other indoor and outdoor activities including doing exercise, travelling and voluntary work. This can lead to children can get obesity easily. As a consequence, the less time children spend on doing exercise, the more overweight they are.

It is certain that school and parent have responsibility to deal with these. The one hand, parent should limit amount of time wasting in television. Particularly, they can ask their children help them do housework. On the other hand, school should celebrate more daily physical activities such as sport clubs, colective activities and music clubs to encourage their sudent to take part in. Evidently, children can improve their soft skill, specifically communication skill, teamwork skill after participating these activities.

In conlusion, the attention of parent and consciousness of aldolescent can make a contribution to answer this question why recent days childrent have spent much time on watching TV. Futhermore, school and family play an crucial role in decreasing quantity of time which children use for television.
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TV programes have been popular in the world over several decades.It contains abundant and divese contents Also there are almost entertainning shows, science programes and even though news.
It is argued that nowadays young generation have spent more time to watch TV than do exercise. This essay will find out main reasons why children waste a plenty of time in watching TV. And then, we will have solutions to handle these problems by focussing on role of family and lifestyle of teenager.

There are two main reasons which can be considered to be a factor contribution in these issues. Firstly, in modern life, most of parents are so extremely busy for their job that they don’t have enough extra attention for their children. Apparently, in this result children can watch TV for a long time, which can not be controled by their parent. Secondly, After a period of time keeping watch on TV, children can not arrange their time to engage in other indoor and outdoor activities. Those include doing exercise, travelling and voluntary work. This can lead to children who can get obesity easily. As a consequence, the less time children spend on doing exercise, the more overweight they are.

It is certain that school and parent have responsibility to deal with these. The one hand, parent should limit amount of time wasting in television. Particularly, they can ask their children help them do housework. On the other hand, school should celebrate more daily physical activities such as sport clubs, colective activities and music clubs to encourage their student to take part in. Evidently, children can improve their soft skill, specifically communication skill, teamwork skill after participating these activities.

In conclusion, the attention of parent and consciousness of aldolescent can make a contribution to answer this question why recent days childrent have spent much time on watching TV. Futhermore, school and family play an crucial role in decreasing quantity of time which children use for television.

 

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Talk show+> talk shows

Line: Related-> relating

young generation have_> has

line 4, obmit "a"

solution-> solutions

focusing=> anh focus

 "two main reasons which can be considered to be a factor"=> to be factors

busy for+> busy with 

controled=> controlled, their parent=> parents 

this result in children=> the results is children..

"including doing exercise, travelling and voluntary work." : being not equal structure

"This can lead to children can get obesity easily": grammar?, lead (sb) to do

As a consequence: should use in the last paragraph, not the body paragraphs 

school and parent have responsibility to deal with these.:??? +N. parents, 

 limit amount of time children wasting in television

 their children and help them to do the homework 

sport clubs, colective activities and music clubs

sudent => student

 their soft skill, =>skills

of parentsand consciousness of aldolescent

 children

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TV programes have been popular in the world over several decades which contain abundant and diverse contents related to a large number of different areas like films, music, talk show. It is argued that nowadays young generation has taken much time to watch TV as well as use less time for doing physical activities. This essay will look at main reasons why children waste a plenty of time in watching TV and solution to handle these problems, focussing on the role of family and lifestyle of the teenager.

There are two main reasons which can be considered to be a factor contribution in these issues. Firstly, in modern life, most of the parents are so extremely busy for their job that they don’t have enough extra attention for their children. Apparently, this result in children can watch TV for a long time, which can not be controled by their parent. Secondly, After a period of time keeping watch on TV, children can not arrange their time to engage in other indoor and outdoor activities including doing exercise, travelling and voluntary work. This can lead to children can get obesity easily. As a consequence, the fewer time children spend on doing exercise, the more overweight they are.

It is certain that school and parent have a responsibility to deal with these. The one hand, the parent should limit the amount of time-wasting in television. Particularly, they can ask their children help them do housework. On the other hand, a school should celebrate more daily physical activities such as sports clubs, collective activities and music clubs to encourage their students to take part in. Evidently, children can improve their soft skill, specifically communication skill, teamwork skill after participating these activities.

In conclusion, the attention of parent and consciousness of adolescent can make a contribution to answering this question why recent days children have spent much time on watching TV. Furthermore, school and family play a crucial role in decreasing quantity of time which children use for television.

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