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"Many hands make light work" mean if everyone do a little bit, the work will less harder. My family aware how difficult to do all the housework alone so we are always have a well cooperation in doing household chores. So everybody in a family has to do housework together. Although we are busy every day, we split the household chores equally.

My dad is the strongest person in the house, so his responsibility includes washes the motorbike, repaints things and does the heavy lifting. My mom teaches in a school in the afternoon, so in the morning she usually cleans the floor, irons the clothes, shops for grocery and does the cooking. In the evening she cooks dinner and cleans the kitchen. But sometimes, he disputes my mother’s cooking. Because he said that he didn’t like the dishes were cooked by my mom. But my mom doesn’t like it because my dad always messy when he is in the kitchen so they always dispute at lunch time and dinner time. This problem makes me tired. In my daily routine, I sweep and clean the floor, hang on the clothes and iron them. I also shower and feed the dog. Whenever I have problem with difficult assignments, doing housework will help me reduce stress. So I really enjoy do household chores.

You can see my family sharing the housework equally. Therefore, on weekend, we have time to hang out and eat out together. I think it is very meaningful and fun after a week with busy and pressure .We love each other very much and expect to live together under the same roof forever. I feel very happy to be alive in my family.
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"Many hands make light work" (i think it is "the work light" you mean) mean(s) (that) if everyone do(es) a little bit, the work will (be) less harder. My family (are) aware (of) how difficult to do all the housework alone so we are (emit "are") always have a well (good not well) cooperation in doing household chores. So everybody in a (the) family has to do housework together. Although we are busy every day, we split the household chores equally.

My dad is the strongest person in the house, so his responsibility includes washes (washing) the motorbike, repaints (repainting) things and does (doing) the heavy lifting. My mom teaches in (at) a school in the afternoon, so in the morning she usually cleans the floor, irons the clothes, shops for grocery and does the cooking. In the evening she cooks dinner and cleans the kitchen. But sometimes, he (my father) disputes (dislikes sounds much better) my mother’s cooking. Because he said that he didn’t like the dishes (that) were cooked by my mom. But my mom doesn’t like it because my dad (is) always messy when he is in the kitchen so they always dispute (argue you mean) at lunch time and dinner time. This problem makes me tired. In my daily routine, I sweep and clean the floor, hang on the clothes and iron them. I also shower and feed the dog. Whenever I have problem with difficult assignments, doing housework will help me reduce stress. So I really enjoy do(ing) household chores.

You can see my family sharing (share) the housework equally. Therefore, on weekend, we have time to hang out and eat out together. I think it is very meaningful and fun after a week with busy (busy is an adjective, you need a noun here) and pressure .We love each other very much and expect to live together under the same roof forever. I feel very happy to be alive in my family.

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