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The pursuit of happiness is an everlasting human endeavour in all societies, in every aspects of our lifes and job is nt an exception. Therefore, comparision of pleasure job and work security has been an controversial issue today. While many peple think a steady job is crucial, it is believed that job sastifaction plays a pivotal role in human's career.

On the one hand, there are several explanation for the critical of doing a job with passion. Firstly, a sastifying job enable people to generate a great zeal everyday, drawing out the full potential of capabilities and presenting the best performance. The suitable job including a comfortable environment workplace, salary and vacations avoid over-stress phenomenon that many employees are facing to. Moreover, the confidence in workers will be boosted significantly if they do not have to be under over pressure. In addition, self-confidence in job can exert a great endeavour to overcome hindrances in their career. Accordingly, they could easily become professionals in their prospect and possess well connection with colleage who has the same passion and desire of contribution.

On the other hand, a steady job still be a safe choice to some people because of its security. It is undeniable that a stable job helps people to avoid risk and get less impediments. For instance, their salary scantily fluctuates and the risk of unemployment would be low due to such job is popular and there are many chances to get a new one. Therefore, they would have been capable of sustaining a stable life since the world are becoming a highly competitive arena. While such job give employees a steady income, sense of security, it is usually not the job that people actually desire for. As a result, it often lead to negative worker's perspective, leading to stress and boredome in job.

In conclusion, although sastifying job is employee 's pursuit, stable job is a right choice for a steady income in order to sustain our life
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The pursuit of happiness is an everlasting human endeavour in all societies(, in every aspects of our lifes and job is nt an exception.)->it affects every aspect of life and job is not ăn exception. Therefore, (thêm the)comparision between (a) pleasure job and work security has been a controversial issue nowadays. While many peple think a steady job is crucial, (it is believed)->i believe  that job sastifaction plays a more important role in one's work life.
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The pursuit of happiness is an everlasting human endeavour in all societies, in every aspects (every aspect) of our lifes (lives) and job is nt an exception. Therefore, comparision (comparison) of pleasure job and work security has been an (a) controversial issue today. While many peple (people) think a steady job is crucial, it is believed that job sastifaction (satisfaction) plays a pivotal role in human's career. 

On the one hand, there are several explanation (explanations) for the critical of doing a job with passion. Firstly, a sastifying (satisfying) job enable people to generate a great zeal everyday, drawing out the full potential of capabilities and presenting the best performance. The suitable job including a comfortable environment workplace, salary and vacations avoid over-stress phenomenon that many employees are facing to. Moreover, the confidence in workers will be boosted significantly if they do not have to be under over pressure. In addition, self-confidence in job (a job or the job) can exert a great endeavour to overcome hindrances in their career. Accordingly, they could easily become professionals in their prospect and possess well connection with colleage (colleague) who has the same passion and desire of contribution.

On the other hand, a steady job still be a safe choice to some people because of its security. It is undeniable that a stable job helps people to avoid risk and get less (fewer) impediments. For instance, their salary scantily fluctuates and the risk of unemployment would be low due to such job (a job) is popular and there are many chances to get a new one. Therefore, they would have been capable of sustaining a stable life since the world are becoming a highly competitive arena. While such job give employees a steady income, sense of security, it is usually not the job that people actually desire for. As a result, it often lead (leads) to negative worker's perspective, leading to stress and boredome (boredom) in job. 

In conclusion, although sastifying (satisfying) job is employee 's pursuit, stable job is a right choice for a steady income in order to sustain our life

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