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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

   With the breakthough of technology in the last decades, it is undeniable that computers play a very instrumental role in life. From my point of view, computers have benefited humans in many following ways. 

    Firstly, thanks to computers, human beings can have been working more easily. Not only do these device help white collars to accomplish their daily tasks in offices such as writing reports or analyzing data, but it has also become a powerful tool which serve workers in managing human resource or caculating with the help of various applications, for instance Excel. Furthermore, it can vary its function as a TV, a radio or a mobile phone that people can entertain themselves with various means of media, like watching movies, listening to music or chatting with friends through social networking sites.
 
    In addition, the advantages of computers can be applied to educational environment. Particularly, in recent years, teachers usually diversify their lectures and make them more fascinating with the aid of computers and projectors. Now, lessons are designed differently and beautifully in the attempt to attract students' attention. Besdies, learners now are also assigned many tasks using computers. For example, they use their laptops to design Powerpoint slides for their presentation, or to make some research for their upcoming graduation papers. Computers are also an innovative invention where an unlimited resource of information can be found from, making our lives much easier than the past. 
 
    In conclusion, computers have been becoming one of the most crucial invention of humans which we can take a lot of advantages from. 
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1. "their daily tasks" ===>>> "day - to - day task". Trang trọng hơn.

2. "Besdies"  ===>>> Besides 

3.  "easier than the past." ===>>> từ "easy" ở đây mình nghĩ bạn nên dùng từ "convenient" sẽ hơp lí hơn.

 4. "...we can take a lot of advantages from." ===>>> we can make use of its advantages in simplying our lives. (Mình đóng góp thêm ideas trong một bài văn trịnh trọng.

 

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