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Money is not able to purchase happiness but it is a mean to fulfill happiness. Therefore, money is a crucial factor to choose a career. Many people choose their professions according to the social status or salary while others pursue their passion occupations. In my opinion, social status and salary are the factors affecting my decision for the following reasons.

Firstly, it is too hard to deny that salary or money can lead people to a better life quality. Choosing a well-paid job is a practical choice. If people merely follow their enthusiasm careers but forget the role of economy, they will have difficulty in existing in this fiercely competitive society. People need money to cover their basic expenses: food, shelter, and clothing. Beyond that, salary job will contribute to support their families in health protection and education. If they can not afford their lives, they will place burdens on their relatives.

Secondly, a profession associating with social status or salary can bring individuals the regard of society. People assume that well position and income reflect their certificates and capacities. To reach that position and salary, people need to illustrate their skills, abilities, etc. For instance, doctors are always admirably respected not only due to their service for community but also their extensive knowledge.

On the other hand, some opinions think that people should pursue occupations they appreciate since their passions can drive them the most successful career in a long term. However, passion is an elusive emotion that changes over time. Moreover, in some cases, many people have to give up their passions halfway to look for another well – paid job because of lacking money.

To sum up, depending on salary and social status when deciding a career should be a more prioritized decision. This does not make people become to be pragmatic but practical. That means people know what is important to them in their lives right now. As long as they do not sacrifice ethics and the things that are valuable to them.

 

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Money is not able to purchase happiness but it is a mean to fulfill happiness. [S1] Therefore, money is a crucial factor to choose a career. [S2] Many people choose their professions according to the social status or salary while others pursue their passion occupations. [S3] In my opinion, social status and salary are the factors affecting my decision for the following reasons. [S4]

Firstly, it is too hard to deny that salary or money can lead people to a better life quality. [S5] Choosing a well-paid job is a practical choice. [S6] If people merely follow their enthusiasm careers but forget the role of economy, they will have difficulty in existing in this fiercely competitive society. [S7] People need money to cover their basic expenses: food, shelter, and clothing. [S8] Beyond that, salary job will contribute to support their families in health protection and education. [S9] If they can not afford their lives, they will place burdens on their relatives. [S10]

Secondly, a profession associating with social status or salary can bring individuals the regard of society. [S11] People assume that well position and income reflect their certificates and capacities. [S12] To reach that position and salary, people need to illustrate their skills, abilities, etc. [S13] For instance, doctors are always admirably respected not only due to their service for community but also their extensive knowledge. [S14]

On the other hand, some opinions think that people should pursue occupations they appreciate since their passions can drive them the most successful career in a long term. [S15] However, passion is an elusive emotion that changes over time. [S16] Moreover, in some cases, many people have to give up their passions halfway to look for another well – paid job because of lacking money. [S17]

To sum up, depending on salary and social status when deciding a career should be a more prioritized decision. [S18] This does not make people become to be pragmatic but practical. [S19] That means people know what is important to them in their lives right now. [S20] As long as they do not sacrifice ethics and the things that are valuable to them. [S21]

[S3]:

  1. passion occupations-> dream job.

[S7]:

  1. difficulty: single or plural?
  2. enthusiasm careers: không hiểu bạn muốn nói gì? Sự nghiệp tình trong công việc hay là nghề nghiệp khiến bạn sai mê?
  3. the role of economy: bạn muốn nói gì? Vai trò của các vấn đề về kinh tế hay là nền kinh tế vì “economy” là nền kinh tế.

[S8]:

  1. shelter: single or plural?

[S9]:

  1. salary job: article. Mình cũng không hiểu bạn muốn nói gì?

[S10]:

  1. can not-> cannot.

[S11]:

  1. a profession associating with-> a profession associated with.

[S12]:

  1. well position: mình biết well-positioned là adj nhưng “well position” thì khá lạ, không biết bạn lấy từ này ở đâu?

[S15]:

  1. some opinions think: người mới suy nghĩ chứ “opinion” mà suy nghĩ thì nghe kỳ lạ.
  2. drive them the most successful career-> drive them to the most successful career

[S19]:

  1. make people become to be pragmatic-> make people pragmatic.

 

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