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Besides the cultural education, the physical education is as well as important. However, nowadays, schools usually only concentrate on the cultural education and ignore the physical education. So how important is the physical education? First of all, it is very good for students'health. Furthermore, it helps students feel more comfortable so that they can have better learning. Students nowadays have to study too much. Therefore, some lessons to do exercises are very necessary to help them relax. Equally important, the physical education brings a comfortable atmostphere at school. Every day going to school, we can do exercises or play sports such as basketball, football, badminton... So that, students won't feel boring and tired when they go to school. In conclusion, the physical education plays an important part at school and we should develop it widely.
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Besides the cultural education, the physical education is important as well. However, nowadays, schools usually only concentrate on the cultural education and ignore the physical education. So how important is the physical education? First of all, it is very good for students'health. Furthermore, it helps students feel more comfortable so that they can have better learning. Students nowadays have to study too much. Therefore, some lessons to do exercises are very necessary to help them relax. Equally important, the physical education brings a comfortable atmostphere at school. Every day, when going to school, we can do exercises or play sports such as basketball, football, badminton... so that, students won't feel bored and tired when they go to school. In conclusion, the physical education plays an important part at school and we should develop it widely.

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