Hi Hoang Gia, mình có góp ý ở phía dưới, bạn xem qua nhé. À với câu này không hiểu ý bạn lắm, giải thích hộ nhé the momentum of rising maintained,
The bar graph shows the percentage of single-child families in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China between 1980 and 2000. (Phần này bạn paraphase các từ cities = metropolis, town, outskirts = suburbs , rural areas = country, countryside )
It is clear that the number of one child families was the highest in cities compared with that in other areas, and that in rural areas was the lowest.
It is clear that there was the highest figure for single-child in metropolis, followed by the figure for single-child in surburbs and the lowest figure for single-child in countryside areas. ( Bạn xem thử nhé)
In the year 1990, the percentage of single-child families in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China increased sharply ( bỏ từ này nhé) nearly twice as much as that the figure in 1980 respectively. The proportion of single-child families in cities was 95%, 45% more than in 1990 ( đây mình đoán bạn ghi nhầm năm 1980 ), ( Ở đây mình suggest, bạn nên kết thúc câu và thêm phần chủ ngữ cho câu mới)and that (mình chưa thấy hai giới từ này đi với nhau ở task1) the figure in outskirts steadily went up by 30% to 70%, compared to that in 1980. The percentage of single-child families in rural areas indicated an double increase from 10% in 1980 to 20% in 1990. Suggest bạn dùng từ đồng nghĩa cho cities, outskirts, rural areas. Single-child families = One child households
By 2000, the momentum of rising maintained (câu này không hiểu ý của bạn lắm). The proportion of single-child families in three areas reached at their peaks, at 100% in cities, at 97% in outskirts, and at 70% in rural areas.
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