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First, Facebook is very addictive and time consuming. Facebook access many hours a day leading to distraction in the work. Second, the information on Facebook is the information has not been verified, it creates. Incorrect information causes serious consequences to our lives such as: extortion, forgery ... Third, Facebook also affect the feelings of people.Because many young people Being too busy talking to social networking friends and forgetting to communicate with loved ones and those around them makes the relationship between people more and more distant. Finally, it negatively affects the health of people. we. In particular, they diminish our sight if we are exposed too much to the blue light of the phone or the computer screen. It also affects memory and speeds up the aging process.
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First, Facebook is very addictive and time-consuming. Facebook accesses many hours a day leading to distraction in the work.

-> Commonly, users spend many hours a day surfing facebook which lead to distraction in the work

Second, the information on Facebook is the information has not been verified, it creates. Incorrect information causes serious consequences to our lives such as: extortion and forgery ...

-> The information in the Facebook is not verified. 

Third, Facebook also affects the feelings of people.Because many young people are  Being too busy to talk talking to about social networking friends and forgetting forget ( forget chia theo many young people) to communicate with loved ones and those around them makes the relationship between people more and more distant.

-> too + adj + (for O) + to V

Finally, it negatively affects the health of people.  In particular, they diminish our sight if we are exposed too much to the blue light of the phone or the computer screen. It also affects memory and speeds up the aging process.

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