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The given bar chart compares and contrasts on (it is reluctant and wrong) the changes ( bỏ S nhé) in the number of times residents in the USA ate out from 2003 to 2013.
Overal lỗi chính tả, it is evident that the percentage of people ate ( why used ate? it should be eat) in fast food restaurants once or twice a => per month and a few times a => per year rose (rose nội động từ) while the remainings decreased over 10 years period
In details, the most striking feature of the chart iss lỗi chính tả that the proportion of people ate out once a week was the highest figure with 31% in 2003, then rose significantly to reach a peak of approcimately lỗi chính tả33% in 2006 before declining to 28% in 2013. Similarly, the rate of individuals ate in restaurants everyday => ever day lỗi chính tảstarted at only 4% in 2003 and then witnessed a minimal decline to 3% in 2006. After that, the statistic remained stable at 3% from 2006 to 2013. In a stark contrast, there was a gradual increase in the percentage of folks ate out once or twice a month from 30% in 2003 to 33% in 2013