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"I FELT ANGRY AS I GOT OFF THE TRAIN".On board, I had sat near a woman. She seemed to be sneaky.She had talked to me and offered me some water. After that, i had felt dizzy and fainted.I woke up disoriented as soon as the train had already parked at the station.I had tried to figure out what happened but i still didn't remember anything. When i was going to go away the train. I checked my luggage and personal items. " Oh my god". I lost the wallet. I tried to check everywhere, but i didn't find it. I asked people in that area about the wallet but nobody cared. Actually, i felt angry and tired as i got off the train. That woman probably had stolen it.

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"I FELT ANGRY AS I GOT OFF THE TRAIN".On the train, I had sat near a woman who seemed to be sneaky.She talked to me and offered me some water. After that, i felt dizzy and fainted.I woke up disorientedly as the train had parked at the station. I had tried to figure out what happened but i didn't remember anything. When I checked my luggage and personal items, " Oh my god",I had lost my wallet. I tried to check everywhere, but i didn't find it. I asked people in that area about the wallet but nobody cared. That woman probably had stolen it. Finally, i felt angry and exhausted as i got off the train.

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