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Sports are generally divided into team sports and individual sports. This essay is aimed to consider the benefits of each type before reaching a final conclusion.

 

In terms of team sports, they often guarantee players higher possibilities to succeed and achieve the shared aim for many reasons. First of all, as a team consists of fellow counterparts, who have the same passion and purpose, they can take care of and support each other mentally and physically like a family. Therefore, players feel more motivated and enthusiastic to practise and improve themselves. Secondly, cooperation effectively takes advantage of each member's strength and compensates for one's weakness. To be clearer, specific and individual tasks are allocated to each member based on their abilities and levels so that they can contribute their best. Furthermore, this saves a great deal of time and effort that are required in the process of training.

 

In terms of individual sports, players are likely to enjoy more freedom. Specifically, they can play with their own styles, accomplish the tasks in their own way and make their own decision without having to consult or even quarrel with others. Players are free and active in establishing training schedule and method. Additionally, outstanding individuals are easily spotted and promoted by talent seekers and huge corporations. Famous tennis player Raphael Nadal is a shining example of this case. However, participants in individual sports also suffer from a variety of pressures, which can adversely affect their performance and lead to unwanted results.

 

In conclusion, team sports seem to be more beneficial and suitable to take part in than individual ones. However, this statement is not true for everyone. People should consider their characters and talents meticulously so that they can choose an appropriate form of sports.

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Sports are generally divided into team sports and individual sports. This essay is aimed to consider the benefits of each type before reaching a final conclusion.

In terms of team sports, they often guarantee players higher possibilities to succeed and achieve the shared aim for many reasons[W2] . First of all,[W3]  as a team consists of fellow counterparts, who have the same passion and purpose, they can take care of and support each other mentally and physically like a family.[W4]  Therefore, players feel more motivated and enthusiastic to practise and improve themselves. Secondly, cooperation effectively takes advantage of each member's strength and compensates for one's weakness. To be clearer, specific and individual tasks are allocated to each member based on their abilities and levels so that they can contribute their best[W5] . Furthermore, this saves a great deal of time and effort that are required in the process of training[W6] .


 [W1]I personally think, this question is not full, and next time you should  write it fully so people are able to evolve and discuss more on the topic.

 [W2]Expression error: As a reader I extrmely confuse what you mean here?

Refer: People take part in team to play sports as well as football, basketball, volleyball etc which have higher possibilities to succeed in their home lives and works.

 [W3]Expression suggestion: I prefer to use firstly or first

 [W4]Expression suggestion: the reason is too general, not well in convince reader.

Suggest to take example after explaining.

Refer: For instance, in foodball team, players learn to discover strength and weekess of teamates for coporating well in every match.

 [W5]Expression suggestion: I believe the point of question is that how individual and team sport bring benefits for player an which one is better.  

The reason is here, it is not right to dicuss on the objective

 [W6]This sentence is same what I comment on W4

 

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Sports are generally divided into team sports and individual sports.

 

This essay is aimed to consider the benefits of each type before reaching a final conclusion. Dùng thể chủ động không phải bị động

 

In terms of team sports, they often guarantee players higher possibilities to succeed and achieve the shared aim for many reasons.

 

 First of all, as a team consists of fellow counterparts, who have the same passion and purpose, they can take care of and support each other mentally and physically like a family.  Dung số nhiều passions và purposes

 

Therefore, players feel more motivated and enthusiastic to practise and improve themselves. Dùng often/ought to/ may + feel; có thể dung as well as / both thay and

 

Secondly, cooperation effectively takes advantage of each member's strength and compensates for one's weakness.

 

To be clearer, specific and individual tasks are allocated to each member based on their abilities and levels so that they can contribute their best.

 

 Furthermore, this saves a great deal of time and effort that are required in the process of training. Rút gọn thành required

 

In terms of individual sports, players are likely to enjoy more freedom.

 

Specifically, they can play with their own styles, accomplish the tasks in their own way and make their own decision without having to consult or even quarrel with others. Câu này viết hơi rối

Players are free and active in establishing training schedule and method. Additionally, outstanding individuals are easily spotted and promoted by talent seekers and huge corporations. Nên dùng are likely / often

 

Famous tennis player Raphael Nadal is a shining example of this case.

 However, participants in individual sports also suffer from a variety of pressures, which can adversely affect their performance and lead to unwanted results. Nên dùng undesired result

 

In conclusion, team sports seem to be more beneficial and suitable to take part in than individual ones. However, this statement is not true for everyone. People should consider their characters and talents meticulously so that they can choose an appropriate form of sports.

 

 

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