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The acceleration of technological developments has made the world a great and convenient place to live in. Because of today's technology has provided various leisure options, visualization of learning content and entertainment contributes to giving people more opportunities to communicate and work together. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also has positive and negative aspects. 
First of all, smartphones are one of the most significant inventions for our in life. Because smartphones can help people keep in touch with families, friends, colleagues anytime and anywhere. Secondly, it also has considered one of the modern educational methods by using them everyone can access dictionary just by tapping the word if you don't know the meaning of the word. 
On the other hand, it is true that smartphones can help students in studies but only if they use them wisely. Most of the other students are busy keeping their eyes on their smartphones at all times then they won't get time for studying which would lead poor grades. In conclusion, smartphones are necessary for our modern lives today. However, it is helpful or not, which depends on our ways of using it. It will be better if we use its true purpose and at an appropriate time.

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